Friday 7 October 2011

Is this a good poem to read?

it's called.

%26quot;life and personality%26quot;

Life can be fun sometimes or it can be bad or just plane sucks, but that's how life is.you cant change your personality from your old life to your new one.because your just making different Changes in your life,like your personality. that's why my poem is called life and personality.

is that pretty good?
Is this a good poem to read?
Hey Good poem ...

You have anlysed life in a quite different way

U can write some more reality about life ....



A good try

All the best ....
Is this a good poem to read?
No it is not good poem .IT is look like novel.
yes good

life is gift of good it involve human nature

where there are challenges to faced

it need more patient a person will get achievement
That's not a proper poem. It looks more my prose than poetry.
it looks like a story but it's nice anyway